Friday, January 18, 2013

What does Romiette's father do for a living in Romiette and Julio?

Romiette and Julio is a novel by Sharon Draper than modernizes William Shakespeare's classic Romeo and Juliet for a more diverse and contemporary audience.


In the book, Romiette is a young African-American woman who has little interest in boys or dating until she meets Julio, a Hispanic teenager and recent transplant from Corpus Christi, Texas, in an online chat room. The pair discovers that they attend the same high school and eventually fall in love despite the disapproval of their families and the looming threat of gangs who dislike their interracial relationship.


Cornell Cappelle is Romiette's father, and he is employed as a reporter at the local news station in Cincinnati, Ohio. As a relatively minor character in the book, he is largely portrayed as a good father who is always willing to lend a sympathetic ear to his daughter when she needs it--a departure from the strict parenting style of Lord Capulet in the original Shakespearean text.

Why did Orwell choose Winston as his protagonist in 1984?

In 1984, Winston Smith is employed within the Party's propaganda department, the Ministry of Truth. His job is to ensure that all existing documentation matches the aims and beliefs of the Party, to create the perception that the Party is consistent in its views; this involves changing documents, erasing the names and photographs of individuals who the Party deems "unpersons," and generally rewriting history. Having the main character serve this role is important to the story, because Winston has more insight into the truth about the world he lives in than others employed in different sectors of the Party. It is important throughout the story that Winston is a person who is aware of the Party's propagandizing, lying, and revisionism; it is the knowledge he gains from doing his job that allows him the awareness he needs to begin secretly hating and rebelling against the party. If, for example, Julia were the narrator of the story, there would be no insight into the process of revisionism; Julia hates the oppressive government too, but her job doesn't put her in a position of constant awareness of the ways in which she is being lied to.

Tuesday, January 15, 2013

Describe the historical concepts of mental illness.


Introduction

People are social creatures who learn how to behave appropriately in families and in communities. What is considered appropriate, however, depends on a host of factors, including historical period, culture, geography, and religion. Thus, what is valued and respected changes over time, as do sociocultural perceptions of aberrant or deviant behavior. How deviancy is treated depends a great deal on the extent of the deviancy—is the person dangerous, a threat to self or to the community, in flagrant opposition to community norms, or is the person just a little odd? How the community responds also depends on its beliefs as to what causes aberrant behavior. Supernatural beliefs in demons, spirits, and magic were common in preliterate societies; in the medieval Western world, Christians believed that the devil was in possession of deranged souls. Hence, the mad were subjected to cruel treatments justified by the idea of routing out demons or the devil. For centuries, the prevailing explanation for madness was demonic possession.







Prior to the nineteenth century, families and communities cared for the mad. If they were unmanageable or violent, the mad were incarcerated in houses of correction or dungeons, where they were manacled or put into straitjackets. If a physician ever attended someone who was deemed mad by the community, it was to purge or bleed the patient to redress a supposed humoral imbalance. Most medical explanations before the advent of scientific medicine were expressed in terms of the four humors: black and yellow bile, blood, and phlegm. Imbalances usually were treated with laxatives, purgatives, astringents, emetics, and bleeding. In the late eighteenth century, however, understanding moved from the holistic and humoral to the anatomical, chemical, and physiological. Views of humans and their rights also changed enormously around this time as a consequence of the American and French Revolutions.


During the nineteenth and twentieth centuries, madhouses were first replaced by more progressive lunatic asylums and then by mental hospitals and community mental health centers. In parallel fashion, custodians and superintendents of madhouses became mad-doctors or alienists in the nineteenth century and psychiatrists, psychologists, and counselors of various kinds in the twentieth century. Similarly, the language changed: Madness was variously called lunacy, insanity, derangement, or alienation. The contemporary term is mental disorder. These changes reflect the rejection of supernatural and humoral explanations of madness in favor of a disease model with varying emphases on organic or psychic causes.




Early Views of Madness

One of the terrible consequences of the belief in supernatural possession by demons was the inhumane treatment in which it often resulted. An example is found in the book of Leviticus in the Bible, which many scholars believe is a compilation of laws that had been handed down orally in the Jewish community for as long as a thousand years until they were written down, perhaps about 700 b.c.e. Leviticus 20:27, in the King James version, reads, “A man or a woman that hath a familiar spirit . . . shall surely be put to death: they shall stone him with stones.” The term “familiar spirit” suggests demonic possession, and death was the response for dealing with demons in their midst.


There were exceptions to the possession theory and the inhumane treatment to which it often led. Hippocrates, who lived around 300 b.c.e. in Greece and who is regarded as the father of medicine, believed that mental illness had biological causes and could be explained by human reason through empirical study. Although Hippocrates found no cure, he did recommend that the mentally ill be treated humanely, as other ill people would be treated.


The period of Western history that is sometimes known as the Dark Ages was particularly dark for the mad. Folk belief, theology, and occult beliefs and practices of all kinds often led to terrible treatment. Although some educated and thoughtful people, even in that period, held humane views, they were in the minority regarding madness.




Eighteenth and Nineteenth Century Views

It was not until what could be considered the modern historical period, the end of the eighteenth century, that major changes took place in the treatment of the insane. Additionally, there was a change in attitudes toward the insane, in approaches to their treatment, and in beliefs regarding the causes of their strange behaviors. One of the pioneers of this new attitude was the French physician Philippe Pinel
. Pinel was appointed physician-in-chief of the Bicêtre Hospital in Paris in 1792. The Bicêtre was one of a number of “asylums” that had developed in Europe and in Latin America over several hundred years to house the insane. Often started with the best of intentions, most of the asylums became hellish places of incarceration.


In the Bicêtre, patients were often chained to the walls of their cells and lacked even the most elementary amenities. Under Pinel’s guidance, the patients were freed from their confinement—popular myth has Pinel removing the patients’ shackles personally, risking death if he should prove to be wrong about the necessity for confinement, but in fact it was Pinel’s assistant Jean Baptiste Pussin who performed the act. Pinel also discarded the former treatment plan of bleeding, purging, and blistering in favor of a new model that emphasized talking to patients and addressing underlying personal and societal causes for their problems, using medical treatments such as opiates only as a last resort. Talking to his patients about their symptoms and keeping careful notes of what they said allowed Pinel to make advances in the classification of mental illnesses as well.


This change was occurring in other places at about the same time. After the death of a Quaker in Britain’s York Asylum, the local Quaker community founded the York Retreat, where neither chains nor corporal punishment were allowed. In America, Benjamin Rush, a founder of the American Psychiatric Association, applied his version of moral treatment, which was not entirely humane as it involved physical restraints and fear as therapeutic agents. Toward the middle of the nineteenth century, American crusader Dorothea Dix
fought for the establishment of state mental hospitals for the insane. Under the influence of Dix, thirty-two states established at least one mental hospital. Dix had been influenced by the moral model, as well as by the medical sciences, which were rapidly developing in the nineteenth century. Unfortunately, the state mental hospital often lost its character as a “retreat” for the insane.


The nineteenth century was the first time in Western history that a large number of scientists turned their attention to abnormal behavior. For example, the German psychiatrist Emil Kraepelin spent much of his life trying to develop a scientific classification system for psychopathology. Sigmund Freud attempted to develop a science of mental illness. Although many of Freud’s ideas have not withstood empirical investigation, perhaps his greatest contribution was his insistence that scientific principles apply to mental illness. He believed that abnormal behavior is not caused by supernatural forces and does not arise in a chaotic, random way, but that it can be understood as serving some psychological purpose.




Modern Medicines

Many of the medical and biological treatments for mental illness in the first half of the twentieth century were frantic attempts to deal with very serious problems—attempts made by clinicians who had few effective therapies to use. The attempt to produce convulsions (which often did seem to make people “better,” at least temporarily) was popular for a decade or two. One example was insulin shock therapy, in which convulsions were induced in mentally ill people by insulin injection. Electroshock therapy was also used. Originally it was primarily used with patients who had schizophrenia, a severe form of psychosis. Although it was not very effective with schizophrenia, it was found to be useful with patients who had depressive psychosis. Now known as electroconvulsive therapy, it continues to be used in cases of major depression or bipolar disorder which are resistant to all other treatments. Another treatment sometimes used, beginning in the 1930’s, was prefrontal lobotomy. Many professionals today would point out that the use of lobotomy indicates the almost desperate search for an effective treatment for the most aggressive or the most difficult psychotic patients. As originally used, lobotomy was an imprecise slashing of the frontal lobe of the brain.


The real medical breakthrough in the treatment of psychotic patients was associated with the use of certain drugs from a chemical family known as phenothiazines. Originally used in France as a tranquilizer for surgery patients, their potent calming effect attracted the interest of psychiatrists and other mental health workers. One drug of this group, chlorpromazine, was found to reduce or eliminate psychotic symptoms in many patients. This and similar medications came to be referred to as antipsychotic drugs. Although their mechanism of action is still not completely understood, there is no doubt that they worked wonders for many severely ill patients while causing severe side effects for others. The drugs allowed patients to function outside the hospital and often to lead normal lives. They enabled many patients to benefit from psychotherapy. The approval of the use of chlorpromazine as an antipsychotic drug in the United States in 1955 revolutionized the treatment of many mental patients. Individuals who, prior to 1955, might have spent much of their lives in a hospital could now control their illness effectively enough to live in the community, work at a job, attend school, and be a functioning member of a family.


In 1955, the United States had approximately 559,000 patients in state mental hospitals; seventeen years later, in 1972, the population of the state mental hospitals had decreased almost by half, to approximately 276,000. Although all of this cannot be attributed to the advent of the psychoactive drugs, they undoubtedly played a major role. The phenothiazines had finally given medicine a real tool in the battle with psychosis. One might believe that the antipsychotic drugs, combined with a contemporary version of the moral treatment, would enable society to eliminate mental illness as a major human problem. Unfortunately, good intentions go awry. The “major tranquilizers” can easily become chemical straitjackets; those who prescribe the drugs are sometimes minimally involved with future treatment. In the late 1970s, the makers of social policy saw what appeared to be the economic benefits of reducing the role of the mental hospital, by discharging patients and closing some mental hospitals. However, they did not foresee that large numbers of homeless psychotics would live in the streets as a consequence of deinstitutionalization. The plight of the homeless during the early part of the twenty-first century continues to be a serious, national problem in the United States.




Disorder and Dysfunction

The twentieth century saw the exploration of many avenues in the treatment of mental disorders. Treatments ranging from classical psychoanalysis to cognitive and humanistic therapies to the use of therapeutic drugs were applied. Psychologists examined the effects of mental disorders on many aspects of life, including cognition and personality. These disorders affect the most essential of human functions, including cognition, which has to do with the way in which the mind thinks and makes decisions. Cognition does not work in “ordinary” ways in the person with a serious mental illness, making his or her behavior very difficult for family, friends, and others to understand. Another aspect of cognition is perception. Perception has to do with the way that the mind, or brain, interprets and understands the information that comes to a person through the senses. There is a general consensus among most human beings about what they see and hear, and perhaps to a lesser extent about what they touch, taste, and smell. The victim of mental illness, however, often perceives the world in a much different way. This person may see objects or events that no one else sees, phenomena called hallucinations. The hallucinations may be visual—for example, the person may see a frightening wild animal that no one else sees—or the person may hear a voice accusing him or her of terrible crimes or behaviors that no one else hears.


A different kind of cognitive disorder is delusions. Delusions are untrue and often strange ideas, usually growing out of psychological needs or problems of a person who may have only tenuous contact with reality. A woman, for example, may believe that other employees are plotting to harm her in some way when, in fact, they are merely telling innocuous stories around the water cooler. Sometimes people with mental illness will be disoriented, which means that they do not know where they are in time (what year, what season, or what time of day) or in space (where they live, where they are at the present moment, or where they are going).


In addition to experiencing cognitive dysfunction that creates havoc, mentally ill persons may have emotional problems that go beyond the ordinary. For example, they may live on such an emotional “high” for weeks or months at a time that their behavior is exhausting both to themselves and to those around them. They may exhibit bizarre behavior; for example, they may talk about giving away vast amounts of money (which they do not have), or they may go without sleep for days until they drop from exhaustion. This emotional “excitement” seems to dominate their lives and is called mania. The word “maniac” comes from this terrible emotional extreme.


At the other end of the emotional spectrum is clinical depression. This does not refer to the ordinary “blues” of daily life, with all its ups and downs, but to an emotional emptiness in which the individual seems to have lost all emotional energy. The individual often seems completely apathetic. The person may feel life is not life worth living and may have anhedonia, which refers to an inability to experience pleasure of almost any kind.




Treatment Approaches

Anyone interacting with a person suffering from severe mental disorders comes to think of him or her as being different from normal human beings. The behavior of those with mental illness is regarded, with some justification, as bizarre and unpredictable. They are often labeled with a term that sets them apart, such as “crazy” or “mad.” There are many words in the English language that have been, or are, used to describe these persons—many of them quite cruel and derogatory. Since the nineteenth century, professionals have used the term “psychotic” to denote severe mental illness or disorder. Interestingly, one translation of psychotic is “of a sickness of the soul” and reflects the earlier belief regarding the etiology, or cause, of mental illness. This belief is still held by some therapists and pastoral counselors in the twenty-first century. Until the end of the twentieth century, the term “neurosis” connoted more moderate dysfunction than the term “psychosis.” However, whether neurosis is always less disabling or disturbing than psychosis has been an open question. An attempt was made to deal with this dilemma in 1980, when the DSM-III officially dropped the term “neurosis” from the diagnostic terms.


The contemporary approach to mental disorder, at its best, offers hope and healing to patients and their families. However, much about the etiology of mental disorder remains unknown to social scientists and physicians.


In 1963, President John F. Kennedy signed the Community Mental Health Act. Its goal was to set up centers throughout the United States offering services to mentally and emotionally disturbed citizens and their families, incorporating the best that had been learned and that would be learned from science and from medicine. Outpatient services in the community, emergency services, “partial” hospitalizations (adult day care), consultation, education, and research were among the programs supported by the act. Although imperfect, it nevertheless demonstrated how far science had come from the days when witches were burned at the stake and the possessed were stoned to death.


When one deals with mental disorder, one is dealing with human behavior—both the behavior of the individual identified as having the problem and the behavior of the community.
The response of the community is critical for the successful treatment of disorder. For example, David L. Rosenhan, in a well-known 1973 study titled “On Being Sane in Insane Places,” showed how easy it is to be labeled “crazy” and how difficult it is to get rid of the label. He demonstrated how one’s behavior is interpreted and understood on the basis of the labels that have been applied. (The “pseudopatients” in the study had been admitted to a mental hospital and given a diagnosis—a label—of schizophrenia. Consequently, even their writing of notes in a notebook was regarded as evidence of their illness.) To understand mental disorder is not merely to understand personal dysfunction or distress, but also to understand social and cultural biases of the community, from the family to the federal government. The prognosis for eventual mental and emotional health depends not only on appropriate therapy but also on the reasonable and humane response of the relevant communities.




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Berrios, German E., and Roy Porter. A History of Clinical Psychiatry: The Origin and History of Psychiatric Disorders. New Brunswick: Athlone, 1999. Print.



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In Lee's To Kill a Mockingbird, how does the end of Tom Robinson's trial affect Jem, Scout, and Calpurnia?

Tom Robinson's trial is covered in chapters 17-21 in Lee's To Kill a Mockingbird. Jem and Scout watch all of the proceedings of the trial, and they are thoroughly engaged in it too. Jem feels as though is father, Atticus, proves that Tom could not have raped Mayella Ewell; therefore, he honestly believes that the jury must find the defendant not guilty. To Jem's disappointment, Tom is not acquitted of the charges; rather, he is convicted. Scout describes Jem's reaction as they leave the courthouse that night in the following passage:



"It was Jem's turn to cry. His face was streaked with angry tears as we made our way through the cheerful crowd. 'It ain't right,' he muttered, all the way to the corner of the square where we found Atticus waiting" (212).



Not only does Jem cry, but he loses a little bit of faith in humanity. Over the course of the months that follow, Jem has legal, social, and political discussions about the issues involved in the trial. Jem learns about reasonable men will sometimes act in the name of prejudice, and under social pressure, rather than support truth and justice, which is not a comfortable idea to realize.


Scout, on the other hand, is sad about the outcome of the trial, but she learns how to spot prejudice as a result of it. For example, Scout recognizes that her 3rd grade teacher, Miss Gates, is a hypocrite and a racist during a class discussion about the way Jews are treated by Hitler in Germany. When Scout goes home to talk about this with Jem in chapter 26, she reveals her quick mind as in the following passage:



"Well, coming out of the courthouse that night Miss Gates . . . was talking with Miss Stephanie Crawford. I heard her say it's time somebody taught 'em a lesson, they were gettin' way above themselves, an' the next thing they think they can do is marry us. Jem, how can you hate Hitler so bad an' then turn around and be ugly about folks right at home--" (247).



Scout makes the correct connection between how people are ugly to each other in Maycomb as Hitler is to Jews. She shows here that she is starting to see how people won't simply change because of the facts or logic. Consequently, Scout's understanding about people and life is maturing. Jem's response to Scout in this situation is less than mature because he is still upset over the outcome of the trial. He says the following:



"I never wanta hear about that courthouse again, ever, ever you hear me? You hear me? Don't you ever say one word to me about it again, you hear? Now go on!" (247).



As far as Calpurnia is concerned, not much is said about her opinions about the results of the trial. She shows up to work for Atticus and the children the next morning as usual. However, when she arrives at the house, she finds loads of food left on the back steps from people in the black community of Maycomb. Tom's father even sends over a chicken for Atticus and Calpurnia cooks it up for his breakfast. Then she asks Atticus if her community has overstepped its bounds, but he tells her to tell the people that he is grateful for their demonstration of appreciation. If Calpurnia is upset about the outcome of the trial, she doesn't show it negatively. She cooks up the chicken for breakfast, and by doing so, seems to show her own appreciation for Atticus taking Tom's trial seriously.

What was the reason for the Spanish Armada? Why was Spain willing to invade England?

The Spanish Armada was one of the largest naval fleets in history. It was assembled and deployed by the government of Spain in 1588 in an (ultimately unsuccessful) attempt to conquer England.

Spain had many reasons to dislike England, and, during that period, conquering countries you didn't like was a relatively common activity. Today we might file a motion with the UN or negotiate a trade agreement, but back then the usual choice was to deploy a naval fleet, so that is what Spain did.

One of the main reasons was that England was Protestant and Spain was Catholic, so many other countries across Europe effectively "took sides" in this theological divide. The infamous Spanish Inquisition, where members of the Catholic Church investigated and punished all non-Catholic "heretics" they found, occurred during this time.

England, on the other hand, tried to spread Protestantism across Europe, particularly in Holland, which was controlled by Spain but seeking independence.

There was also a strategic reason for Spain's attempted invasion of England: King Phillip II wanted to deploy troops to Holland to secure Spanish control there, but knew the English Navy would resist a deployment if he transported them by sea across the English Channel. King Phillip II could not send military by land, either, as the troops would pass through France, angering the French in the process.

England was also employing privateers (a cross between mercenaries and pirates) such as Francis Drake to plunder goods from Spanish ships, particularly silver. This gave Spain an economic motive as well.

Before meeting him, what does Nick tell us about Tom Buchanan?

In the first chapter of The Great Gatsby (Fitzgerald), Nick is about to see Tom Buchanan for the first time since they were in college together. He describes his recollection of him from those years. Tom was a "powerful" (10) football player in college, with a national reputation as such. And Nick comments that in a way, Tom had peaked at just this one thing during those years and had done nothing worthwhile ever since. We also learn that Tom is from a family that is "enormously wealthy" (10), so wealthy that Tom was able to bring his polo ponies with him to the east. He and his wife Daisy, who is a distant cousin to Nick, have "drifted here and there" (10), where the polo games were, and had spent some time in France, too. Tom Buchanan, in other words, has two attributes that stand out in Nick's memory, physical power and wealth. There is absolutely nothing to suggest that Nick remembers him with any warmth or affection.

Monday, January 14, 2013

Are there any key tips to writing an amazing essay that follows all of the standard essay guidelines? (I'm terrible at gathering all of my ideas...

Many a student has found success in essay writing by following a planned structure, or blueprint, as it is called by certain publishers.


The fundamentals of essay writing are organization, support, unity, and coherence. Organization is achieved by following a "blueprint" which is designed for a five-paragraph essay, which is composed of 


  1. The introductory paragraph

  2. The first central paragraph

  3. The second central paragraph

  4. The third central paragraph

  5. The concluding paragraph

1. The introductory paragraph 
a) This paragraph is composed of what is often called a "hook," or a "motivator." A "motivator" is usually about three sentences that capture the reader's interest in the topic about which the student is writing.
This motivator can be composed from a quotation, a question, or an observation by the writer. For example, if the student is assigned a narrative essay about a personal experience, he/she can begin with an observation something like this:



So often choices that people make long affect their lives. How often have many people felt like the speaker of Robert Frost's poem in which he has been at the convergence of two paths and chosen one that "has made all the difference"?



b) The next part of the introductory paragraph is the thesis statement and "blueprint." The thesis statement is a general statement that answers the question of What is the essay going to be about? For instance, if the student is writing a character analysis of Scout from To Kill a Mockingbird, he/she could compose a thesis statement such as this:



In Harper Lee's novel To Kill a Mockingbird, Scout Finch is an unusual girl who develops from having unusual experiences.



A blueprint for this thesis statement is a short summary of the main points that will be developed in the essay. Since the five-paragraph essay is used as an example here, there are three main paragraphs, so the blueprint will have three points.



Scout matures from such unusual experiences as (1) incidents that occur in her neighborhood, (2) the reactions of neighbors and others to Atticus's defense of Tom Robinson, and (3) her own observations and interactions with members of her community.  



The thesis statement with its "blueprint" is the last sentence of the introductory paragraph.


2-4. The body paragraphs 
The body paragraphs develop the "blueprint."  Each paragraph begins with a topic sentence that is formed from each of the three parts of the blueprint. For instance, using the example of character analysis of Scout given above, in the first body paragraph [the second paragraph of the essay], a topic sentence for (1) incidents that occur in her neighborhood, could be something like this:



Topic sentence:


Scout develops a less self-centered perspective from lessons learned after she experiences certain incidents in her neighborhood.



This topic sentence is then supported with details from the novel that exemplify the point made. Sentences are made coherent by the use of connecting ideas and words. One way to connect ideas from one sentence to another is to repeat a word. For example, after writing the topic sentence above, the student could then write a sentence like this:



One such incident in which Scout learns not to judge people too quickly occurs from Jem's rash actions against the neighbor, Mrs. Dubose, and his subsequent assignment to read to her. (Repetition of the words incident and neighbor, which are in the topic sentence.)



After this sentence, the student will want to use a transitional word or clue words.  Clue words are those that indicate examples to follow such as for example, for instance, such as, including, like; comparison words such as also, like, similarly, too, etc.; contrast words such as although, on the other hand, though, unlike, however, but, etc.; and cause and effect words such as as  a result, because, consequently, therefore, thus, etc.


A list of transitions are usually in any grammar text, or they can be obtained at this link: 



http://www.smart-words.org/linking-words/linking-words.pdf



Using these connecting words greatly aids in writing a coherent essay.


The concluding sentence of the first and second body paragraph will lead into the topic sentence of the next paragraph. That is, the student should use some words from the concluding sentence in the topic sentence (formed from the blueprint) for the next paragraph.


5. The concluding paragraph
The final paragraph contains simply (a) a reworded thesis statement and (b) what is called a "clincher," a sentence that provides a sense of finality.


Using the example provided, a conclusion could be something like this:



From her unusual experiences of Boo Radley, Mrs. Dubose, and others in the neighborhood, Scout matures and learns many valuable lessons. Certainly, she has acquired a knowledge of what transpires in the secret hearts of people, a knowledge that can also well serve the reader.



_________________________________________________________


One final tip: In writing the body paragraphs, the use of subordinating clauses and phrases in the sentences helps to establish the importance of ideas as well as enhance coherency and effective communication of ideas. In the example of a concluding sentence above, the use of the appositive phrase (a knowledge that can also well serve the reader) ties the ideas of the sentence together smoothly.


Again, the student may wish to consult a grammar and composition handbook. These can be found as part of high school texts or accompanying texts and often are separate books sold in college bookstores.

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